Title:
Drag-ON THIS!
Design by:
IntegralApparel
Words by the designer:
Submission for the AMD competition. Hopefully it looks like a dragon coming out of your shirt and not some random squiggles!
shoutbacks
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@Bleet, thanks, my line weight is alway terrible, slowly working on it thanks for the critical eye! @ Googz – Thanks man, I think it might of been too much for AMD, plus I didnt even put in the logo for em, now thats lame of me. I shouldnt even submitted it, but we all learn, thanks for the ideas.. @bingBong, thanks as well, after I saw the other AMD ripped shirt I know this was gonna be lame in comparison! Thanks tho, I should of made the rips come over the dragon to add depth, its funny how many things you miss until the design is up. Watch for my January subs, got some hot fire coming!
shoutBack on 18/12/08 by IntegralApparel
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Scotty! I thought you’d left! Imagine my disappointment. Integral -As a general design this is great, and I like it quite a lot. My concern is that I don’t feel that it successfully integrates the theme of AMD. Some more hanging shreds of cloth would I think have emphasized the feel of the dragon ripping its way out of the wearer’s chest. =)
shoutBack on 18/12/08 by Bingbong
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lol what a joke. maybe spend more time on the actual design than packaging it so poorly in your previews with pointless info at the bottom. word
shoutBack on 18/12/08 by scotty
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Awesome dragon! Powerful and firece. Add some AMD branding in there and this fits the bill perfectly!
shoutBack on 18/12/08 by Goggl3boy
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Not a bad design just got to work on the line weight a bit. the closer the object or thing the thicker the line, so the hand should have a slightly heavier weight to the rest. Would have done it hand, arm, head, back, T-shirt. Am I making sense. Good to see something like this on this site tho.
shoutBack on 16/12/08 by bleet
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I know I know! Thanks man, appreicate the honest crits, this shows lack of execution, and simply rushed. I had the stetch and idea out and then, waited to the last minute to submit, I shouldnt even let it go through, bad timing on my part, but maybe I’ll use the idea somewhere else! hint hint! Thanks for the crits, keep it coming!
shoutBack on 15/12/08 by IntegralApparel
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I think this would make a col entry for the normal competition btw :)
shoutBack on 15/12/08 by EranEyal
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Cool illy, but the lack of AMD logo or identity rules it out for me :( I love your shirts – you always make cool and very wearable t-shirt designs, and this one is in no way less – but the lack of and AMD tie-in really steps out of the brief for the client.
shoutBack on 15/12/08 by EranEyal
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Nice illi, but a bit too detailed. Also it’s just a dragon bursting through a t-shirt and no AMD link. Maybe if you should have had the AMD logo showing through where the blue is.
shoutBack on 11/12/08 by Gambyte
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Hmmm…blue blood ‘ey?
shoutBack on 9/12/08 by lostHorizon
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