Title:
Music Is Life
Design by:
willievictor
Words by the designer:
Well the name sez it all
shoutbacks
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Yes the balance is way off especially when it comes to the spacing between the letters. Its a good start, evolve on it and resubmit I suggest, the music note and the fetus needs to connect more and blend, at the moment the note and the fetus seems a bit copy paste like
shoutBack on 16/8/10 by amyabrahams
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Hmmm font/composition and balance seem a bit off. Think the white shirt was a bad choice, it makes the design vanish. The concept is there, but needs work.
shoutBack on 16/8/10 by DuncanBoxie
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Yeah i have to agree with Claudiosworld, something is just off and i also think its the space between the parts
shoutBack on 13/8/10 by wednesdayloves
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Love the font, but i do feel there is too much empty space going on between the elements – also i get the fetus vibe but i don’t think its as effective it doesn’t suit the rest of the design
shoutBack on 12/8/10 by claudiosworld
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