thanks for the comments, to iroshima is the only atomic bomb ever launched on a city even if not directly recalls the incident at least will remember what we can do to a city an atomic bomb.
regarding the effect of the light of the explosion, I chose the white and red to make it as much as possible, because the image indicates that the bomb has already exploded, infati the city in the background is already in ruins

grazie per i commenti, vado spesso in brasile, e solitamente gli spettacoli di capoeira vengono fatti in strada, la scelta della città come sfondo era proprio per questo, oltre a ricordare la doppia anima del brasile in bilico tra natura e progresso

thanks for the comments, I often in brazil, and usually the shows are made of capoeira in the streets, choosing the city as background for this was in addition to recalling the dual soul of brazil poised between nature and progress

Thank you for your opinion, and I think you have some reason

Every opinion and advice on how to improve a design is always welcome.
In fact, the idea was to create some confusion in the viewer and to try something new and not very orthodox

Thank you for comment, for the strange asymmetry, the original design so I did symmetry as possible since the idea was that maybe the fault is too curved lines

Thank you for comment and recommendations

I hate the smurf LoL, nice idea and great design

Japanese kanji that there are pronounced the same way, but you write differently.

The kanji means dragon in the design and comes directly from the Chinese alphabet, the kanji that means school is written so diferente

RYU – A Ryū (流, literally “flow”, with the derived meaning of “mainstream”), or ryūha (流派, literally “mainstream school (of thought)”), is a Japanese word referring to a school of thought in any discipline. In English, the word is frequently used to refer to schools of Japanese Martial Arts.

I like tribal style, nice work

the background of the design was to be the same red shirt, but it’s wrong to save it.
If the design win see if you can mettergli a transparent background.

“you have heard of artifact and timecode record

they have asked us to design thier t-shirt, would you be interested? “

It would be interesting to have more detailed news

Thanks for the comments both negative positive

humility in the remarks I see little, since not even know the style of drawing, the drawing is a Pattern (always know what that means) the effect of non-homogeneity of some parties wanted to recall the effect of a kaleidoscope,

I was just a joke, I thought you understand, even to me like Stephen Kings, thanks for a comments