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I think you could work on the lay-out a bit, but still a great idea
shoutBack on 27/7/09 by ArtAnas
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Would be cool with some more work and if you lost the shadow, i love the kitty tho, SO cute!
shoutBack on 23/7/09 by Lingling
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the cat was illustrated well :-) i love the bubble with the heart in it.. not sure about the thing the fish is on. You definately can illustrate.. so why not add more detail to the thing the fish is on.. like make it victorian or something?
shoutBack on 22/7/09 by cloMO
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Lokololly, I also struggled with the placing- A LOT. I tried the bottom right hand corner but then the fish flying thing ended up smack bang in the middle of the shirt, which looked lame; resizing the design also left too much negative space for my liking so I really am not sure what to do with the placing. any suggestions?
shoutBack on 22/7/09 by pinkfluff
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oh and the fish isn’t really anywhere specific- its just supposed to be somewhere ‘unattainable’- cos the cat really really wants to eat him. but cant’. haha
shoutBack on 22/7/09 by pinkfluff
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Silvan, I kinda see what you’re saying. in my head the light source was more kind of from above, and a little bit in the front of the objects -so i think i should have extended the cat shadow round the other side of his tail as well (a bit late now lol) if the cat’s shadow was really ‘on the left’ it would have been most of the shape of the cat and a lot more displaced i think. anyway thanks for the critique :)
shoutBack on 22/7/09 by pinkfluff
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Cute – I like simple lines!
shoutBack on 22/7/09 by Jade
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the shadows are bad :/ (left from the cat but direct under the fish) and i dont understand where the fish is. is that a flying ufo?
shoutBack on 21/7/09 by silvan
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Cute. I love kitty’s, but I’m afraid this design isn’t placed to my liking.
shoutBack on 21/7/09 by Lokololly
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