its the minds that they choseshoutOut on 31/12/08 by steinei in |
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clones, i see clones everyday, its not thier fault they have been brainwashed to believing that they dont have a choice, to be different so they all goggle and swallow wat the media shuvz down their throat. thats the inspiration behind the tee. |
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the explanation sounds very emo… kinda depressing. though different i suppose…. but yeah, the grammar on the shirt needs work, i’d try help but to be honest i don’t actually know what you were trying to say… also, the cut off design bugs me… maybe make them fade out, rather than just have them chopped off….
shoutBack on 14/1/09 by killerminibus
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thanx for the positive crit will look into it, your foresight is deep…you read into the depth of the design..i like. ps grammar was never really my thing, i guess i need to upgrade.
shoutBack on 6/1/09 by steinei
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I’m really to sorry to point it out, because I think the design has potential, but your grammar in the text on the design itself is flawed, which is a surprisingly big deal to me… What I do like is the simple representation of the individuals, how they might appear to be different through your colour choices, but in essence remain the same – without interest. Its an effective image. My last crit is that I would prefer to not have the images cut off so abruptly, if you had tapered out the rows of them it would have been better aesthetically, at least imo. I’m looking forward to a possible repost, then I think I’d be able to give it a rating I feel it deserves :)
shoutBack on 31/12/08 by Bingbong
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