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Cool Illy man. Maybe the line work could have been a bit darker so that it would stand out more. I think this will work on a black tee with the line work in white.
shoutBack on 21/1/09 by souf
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Have to agree on the white, it wasn’t needed at all.
shoutBack on 21/1/09 by DuncanBoxie
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hey shot silver, thanks man.
shoutBack on 20/1/09 by hachiman
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guys have u looked at the awesome lines on this design! I think this would look amazing on gray. Very cool tho, looking forward to seeing more from you bru.
shoutBack on 20/1/09 by SilverSabre
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thanks for the comments and constructive crit, but seriously, i dunno, without the white it was too unbalanced and with the short time i had to get it done i didnt have any other ideas on how to balance it.. and as for the pink, it was just the only softish colour in the pack that i felt went with me design. no real reason other than that but maybe i’d look good in pink if i ever had this design made?
shoutBack on 16/1/09 by hachiman
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supercoool!!!!!..but why pink?
shoutBack on 16/1/09 by folkaa
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I agree with Tu that a secondary tone would be better, and also some bolder lines would be nice. Other than that, this is very nice
shoutBack on 15/1/09 by Bingbong
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The white bits in the back doesn’t really go with the design, maybe adding a second tone to the jazz players as colouring would work better. As a rule I’d prefer a bit of concept-ness in designs…
shoutBack on 14/1/09 by Tu
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