Motherland fantasy

shoutOut on 1/9/08 by soularmi in

Inspired by the essence of African summer. Rock music is explosive in summertime. Music unites humanity.

Rock Star Baby.
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agree. i don’t really think of rock and a yellow shirt.

shoutBack on 24/9/08 by Eric

when i glanced at design for the 1rst time all i seen was ROCK and i was like cool and then i seen the star and the words baby init and i thought that was awesome yeah baby “when your soul loves the sun, honey rock on !!”

shoutBack on 23/9/08 by mizfitmic

hmmm. being a rocker i must be honest… yellow really isn’t my thing. not so keen on the colour scheme, i think it would fit in better with a reggae or rasta theme… but nice try…

shoutBack on 23/9/08 by killerminibus

I agree with the comment about the colour of the t-shirt. Think it should be a different colour. Otherwise not bad.

shoutBack on 21/9/08 by frostedberry

I think the tee looks great. The only thing I would change is the shirt color. Think it would look better on white.

shoutBack on 16/9/08 by DeadlyEmbrace

a bit too much for me

shoutBack on 16/9/08 by humanised

Yeah not my cup of tea…bit OTT on the colors there.

shoutBack on 9/9/08 by DuncanBoxie

I think the colour usage on the tee is great.

shoutBack on 8/9/08 by SilverSabre

yeah i gotta agree with dusty here! some text tees just work so well because the text included conveys some kind of concept or meaning! But having an arbitrary word on a tee and making it look cool is VERY mr price! its not really my kind of thing! so maybe next month try working on a word which can convey meaning and have the design that surrunds the text support the word!

for me, a good designer has concept and execution down to the tee! (lol excuse the pun)

but otherwise, dont get me wrong, you design well :)

And one more thing…the “baby” text in your design looks like it says gaby! just be careful of what font you use in the future and make sure it legible :)

shoutBack on 4/9/08 by quack

1 problem I noticed which has nothing to do with the design is your lrg 640×800 preview image is distored.

To me thats says a few things about the designer. It either says you don’t pay attention to detail when you submitted and didnt notice it wasnt the right size and got shurnk cause it didnt meet the parameters of the template. It also shows me that you arent ready to win, to me the whole submission process can separate you from the big guys and little guys.

Think if it was a different contest, lets say you had to write a 100+ word essay to win $1,000 USD, and you lost because you wrote a 99 word essay, even if it was the best essay ever wrote you didnt meet the MINIMUM requirements..

This speaks volumes about you, and your design.
It might be a long winded response, but you never know whos looking at springleap for potential designers for their new line or etc. As a famous movie quote one said
“ACT AS IF”
just my .06 cents

shoutBack on 2/9/08 by IntegralApparel
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