Not feeling it, too disjointed. The idea that the dove, gun and tank are clean and the background is messy bothers my eyes.

first impression rocks! this is one of those gems that i think i’ll appreciate more each time i look at it. like the colour combinations. might have had something bright on the page – like the leaf out of the tank in BRIGHT GREEN. (but just my opinion) – but that would have really got people to look at the design